Illustration & Visual Narrative - Task 2 Decisive Movement

1.11.2023 - 3.1.2023 / Week 6- Week 9

Angel Tan Xin Kei / 0356117

Illustration and Visual Narrative / Bachelor of Design (Hons) in Creative Media


Table of Contents 


Lectures

Week 6

Introduction to Composition

Figure 1.1 Week 6 Lecture Slide

Mr. Hafiz emphasized that the most demanding aspect of creating artwork lies in effectively composing it. One should deliberately arrange the focal point of the scene to make it noticeable, even in the most understated manner. 

BASIC COMPOSITION VISUAL RULES
  • Visual Narrative
  • Visual Flow
  • Visual Balance
  • Visual Hierarchy
DIFFERENT TYPES OF SHOTS
  • Establishing
  • Bird's Eyeview
  • Frame Within a Frame
  • Medium Shot
  • Close-Up 
  • Worm's Eyeview

Week 7

Composition Theory 2 // Perspective

Figure 1.2 Week 7 Lecture Slide

Mr. Hafiz has taught us that art with three-dimensional objects on two-dimensional  surface could give the right impression of height, width, depth, and position in relation.

One-Point Perspective 
  • drawing objects emerging from a single point on horizon
  • as images get closer, it will vanish
Two-Point Perspective
  • vanishing points on each other sides which create a greater space
  • establish two sets of overlapping perspectives line
Three-Point Perspective
  • the third vertical axis gives a far broader range of angles and a "look down" feeling
  • more extreme view angle
Isometric View
  • the third vertical axis gives a far broader range of angles and a "look down" feeling
  • more extreme view angle
Dynamic Application
  • mostly applied to illustration scene to adhere perspective method strict way

Week 8

Composition Theory 3 //Fore, Mid and Background

Figure 1.3 Week 8 Lecture Slide

Mr. Hafiz introduced us to different lanes when composing a scene as it is very essential to grab the audience sight.
  • Foreground
    • using size differences and color contrast to highlight the foreground as the main focus
  • Middle-ground
    • using size differences and light/shadow contrast to highlight the middle ground as main focus 
  • Background
    • using shapes and light/shadow contrast to highlight the middle ground as main focus
  • Design Flow 
    • Good arrangement of visual focus using foreground, middle-ground and background should also indicate a sense of movement, and rhythm in your design.


Figure 1.4 Week 9 Lecture Slide

After we had our compositions done, Mr Hafiz ultimately stepped further to next part of our assignment which is introducing on a type of animation called Secondary Action.

Secondary Actions:
  • continuation of action prompted by the primary action where all of these actions work together to create a more seamless animation.

Practical

Week 7 Transparency Gradient and Noise



Figure 3.1.1 Video of Creating Texture using AI



Figure 3.1.2 My Application of Texture Effect

During this week's lectures, Mr. Hafiz showed us a video tutorial for enhancing the depth of the whole image and we have learned how to create textures by adding effects of "Grain" to our illustrations combined with linear, radial, and freeform gradients.

Week 8 Transparency Gradient and Noise

Mr. Hafiz discussed the various methods of utilizing pencil tools in Adobe Illustrator during Independent Learning Week.

Figure 3.2.1 Video of using Pencil

Figure 3.2.2 Pencil Exercise

Mr. Hafiz distributed the exercise and is optional to draw but I have tried using the pen tool after watching the tutorial to sketch, also not forget to increase the setting of smoothness to enhance the overall smoothness of lines and strokes. Below is my outcome:



Figure 3.2.3 My Pen Tool Exercise





Instruction

Task 2 ( 20% ) - Decisive Movement

Exercise & Marking Criteria : 
  • Concept and interpretation of the urban legend (20%)
  • Design quality and minimalist style (30%)
  • Effective use of color, typography, and layout (20%)
  • Integration of minor animations (15%)
  • Artist statement and process documentation (15%)
Learning Goals : 
  • To develop an editorial illustration to represent the chosen text
  • To interpret the narrative's decisive moment or the climax of the narrative
Timeframe : 
  • Week 6 – Week 9 (Deadline on Week 9)
Find out more on...
Figure 3.1 Task 2 Intro to  Editorial Illustration

  
    Figure 3.2 Task 2 Decisive Movement Instruction

 

Task 2 : 

For my assignment, I need to locate an article or story that is Urban Legends from either local or international origins. The artistic style I'm aiming for should draw inspiration from Art Deco. I need to conduct thorough research, gather visual references, and create a mood board exploring style, color, and overall visual direction. Then, initiate sketching with a focus on a clear and compelling composition. Transition to Adobe Illustrator, emphasizing clean lines and minimalism. 

Then, add animations, ensuring they enhance the narrative. Craft a brief artist statement explaining design choices and their connection to the urban legend and editorial context. Submit a high-resolution digital file, preferably in vector format, alongside a link to a presentation or video showcasing the animations, artist statement, and any process documentation.

1. Story Research

After spending time researching urban legends, I stumbled upon the widely-known Japanese tale of Kuchisake-onna. This story, known for its cultural richness and horror elements, has sparked my interest. Below is my summarisation of the stories :
 
Figure 4.1 Info of Kuchisake-Onna's Story Research

2. Moodboard / References 

To delve deeper into its visual representation, I meticulously compiled a mood board referencing various artistic styles, color palettes, and overall visual approaches. This comprehensive research has provided a solid foundation for my upcoming artistic exploration, allowing me to draw inspiration and ensuring a nicer interpretation of this urban legend.

Figure 4.2 Moodboard and Visual References of Kuchisake-Onna's Story

3. Rationale 
Figure 4.3 Visual Direction of my Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork

4. Digital Sketches
As I believe that beginning with digital illustration can be more familiar, after I explored Japanese editorial aesthetics, I decided to sketch key elements from my conceptualized composition. This approach enabled immediate connection, swift iteration, and experimentation. Drawing inspiration from Japanese design, the digital sketches serve as a dynamic foundation, allowing me to refine the layout iteratively and capture the envisioned narrative.

#Sketch 1
In my initial sketch, adhering to the rule of thirds, I positioned Kuchisake to cover her mouth on the street. However, Mr. Hafiz noted that the blue kimono clashes with the background, with no fore-composition kind of creating a floating effect.


Figure 4.5 First Layout of Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork


#Sketch 2
In the second layout, I introduced a sun on the top and a red kimono for contrast, emphasizing Kuchisake with a larger portrait. However, Mr. Hafiz pointed out the continued issue of floating elements due to the lack of a clear composition. 
Figure 4.6 Second Layout of Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork


#Sketch 3
In response, I reevaluate the composition issues according to the rule of thirds, incorporating three key elements. However, Mr. Hafiz pointed out an excess of flower elements on top, creating a messy, non-Art Deco aesthetic of visual coherence.
Figure 4.7 Third Layout of Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork

First Attempt Before Improvising
To delve deeper into its Art-Deco minimalist style, I remodified the layouts by streamlining the floral elements while maintaining the refined composition.

Figure 4.8 First Attempt of Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork

Figure 4.9 First Attempt of Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork

Final Artwork 

        Figure 5.0 Final Attempt of Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork

Figure 5.1 Final Attempt of Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork in PDF format.

In essence, Mr. Hafiz's feedback serves as a valuable guide for refining my artistic vision, emphasizing the importance of seamlessly integrating Art Deco elements within the constraints of a two-dimensional canvas. 

This iterative process not only aligns with the principles of effective design but also reflects a commitment to continuous improvement and a keen responsiveness to constructive criticism.

Figure 5.2 Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork in AI

After covering the topic of lite animation, I have applied previous learning from typography using Adobe Photoshop. I have downloaded all the Artboard in Adobe Illustrator then impost as scrip and stack as whole in Adobe Photoshop.

Figure 5.3 Process of Kuchisake-Onna's Artwork in Adobe Photoshop

Additionally, I've chosen to enhance the GIF by incorporating a jump scare at the end, aiming to infuse a more horror-themed element. I've applied the techniques learned from our Digital Imaging and Photography lessons. Notice the gradual darkening of the sky color in the background. By duplicating the background layers and adjusting filters to Subtract, color dogde, and exclusion, I've intensified the foreground atmosphere. Finally, the Kuchisake-Onna makes a sudden appearance with a slit mouth opened in the foreground for an added fright factor.

Figure 5.4 Changing the Colour Tone of Layers



Final GIF

Figure 5.5 Kuchisake-Onna GIF

 
Figure 5.6 Kuchisake-Onna GIF


Feedback

Week 7 
Mr. Hafiz commented that Kuchisake-Onna (Slit-Mouthed Woman) is a good urban legend to illustrate. Besides, he also aptly noted that my art has successfully embraced the essence of Art Deco, offering a statistically sound representation. However, his critique shed light on the need to refine the composition, as certain elements appeared to be floating.

Week 8
During this period which is our Independent Learning Week, non-specific attention directed towards us but we personally submit progression and I got the comment of  adding and eliminating elements, streamlining the composition by compromising the inherent elegance of Art Deco. Despite these adjustments, I have received positive affirmation from Mr Hafiz that regarding the color palette, and the atmospheric blue background, which effectively conveys a sense of mystery and supernatural ambiance.

Week 9 
Mr. Hafiz's feedback serves as a valuable guide for refining my artistic vision, emphasizing the importance of achieving a seamless integration of Art Deco elements. This iterative process not only aligns with the principles of effective design but also reflects a commitment to continuous improvement and a keen responsiveness to constructive art.



Reflection

Experience

Overall completing the task 2 assignment, engaging in drawing an urban legend for a climax point was interesting, delving into storytelling visual interpretation. Sketching revealed nuances of composition through art. Researching rationale taught me the historical and cultural impact of Japanese, enriching my understanding of how Japanese culture's art should be illustrated. In essence, Mr Hafiz's feedback significantly improved my illustration and it was a fruitful gain for me as it was my first time drawing an Art Deco Urban Legend. Other than that, fortunately, I still remember Mr.Vinod's teaching of creating a GIF from Photoshop and that's when I strengthened my knowledges and applied it through this assignment.

Observation 

Exploring an urban legend for a climax point unveiled narrative potential in artistry. Sketching highlighted scenes in characters and settings, bringing the legend to life visually. Rationale research broadened perspectives, linking cultural elements to the visual narrative. Meanwhile, not just the color scheme and Art Deco style but also the composition to portray the meaning of art is also crucial for readers and audiences to get a better point of view. It is a really good practise for students to study a story and interpret it through editorial text illustration.

Findings

Creating art based on an urban legend for climax points offers immersive storytelling possibilities. Sketching serves as a gateway to embodying folklore visually. Rationale research enriches contextual depth and authenticity. Learning composition significantly amplifies the emotional and narrative impact of drawings. Secondary action animation complements visual storytelling, enhancing engagement and depth.



Comments

Popular posts from this blog

Information Design / Exercises

Game Development // Task 2: Art Asset Development

Information Design / Project 1: Animated Infographic Poster